You have used alliteration and simile successfully, but the requested rhyme scheme is missing.You have an abab rhyme in stanza one, but you needed two stanzas of abcb, a poem where only the second and fourth lines rhyme in each stanza.
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You have used alliteration and simile successfully, but the requested rhyme scheme is missing.
You have an abab rhyme in stanza one, but you needed two stanzas of abcb, a poem where only the second and fourth lines rhyme in each stanza.
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