Friday, April 4, 2008

Beating Me (poem # 1)

I'm tired of you beating me
beating me like a rug you step on
I'm tired of you you beating me
beating me like a slave that disobey


I'm tired of you beating me
beating me to to my grave
I'm tired of you lying to me
lying and saying that you was'nt
going to beat me anymore

please just stop beating me

1 comment:

G. Latman said...

Very good use of figurative language throughout!