Monday, April 14, 2008

Time Flying (poem # 2)

Time flying is very bad

Time flying is very slow

Time flying is making me sad

Time flying is very bloe





Time flying is fast

Time flying is good

Time flying is like wasting gas

Time flying is like saying i would

3 comments:

G. Latman said...

What does "Time flying is very bloe" mean?

You don't have personification or onomatopoeia in your poem, but you do have the correct rhyme scheme.

shanequa said...

i think that your poem is very good dont listen to what he has to say about your poems

shanequa said...

i think that your poem is very good dont listen to what he has to say about your poems