We belong together like dressing on a salad
We belong together like a blanket on a palet
We belong together like bryant and shaq
We belong together like mouse on a trap
We belong together like a bird looking for it's nest
We belong together because im tried to try tomorrow
We belong together because we fled, flagger ,flutter. around
We belong together like jay-z and beyonce
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You handled the alliteration and simile well, but messed up on the rhyme scheme.
I'm seeing a pattern here. You don't seem to understand that a rhyme scheme is a pattern that works throughout a poem. So this is supposed to be Rhyming Couplets. aa bb cc dd ee ff (or aabbccddeeff) and so on. Every 2 lines are paired and they rhyme. What happened?
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